We grow into the dance[1].
This[2] is an
Untitled[3].
As[4]
Poem[5]
Is to poem[6].
We go into the dance.[7]
- photo: © 2009 Jason Riker, Riker Productions
[1] The dance is ours, we are each other’s, we compose the dance. The note goes next to the word it expands.
[2] “This” is this.
[3] or “Untitled”
[4] The dance between simile and metaphor.
[5] or “Poem”
[6] this poem, for example
[7] This dance. The note goes after punctuation if it has a more extensive field.